Since you asked for Critiques, I'm gonna try to offer some. I think it looks great, but maybe Adventure shouldn't be the first of the three things listed. People usually look for a photographer for Senior Pictures or Weddings before adventures, unless that's what you were going for in showing someone initially that you are different from the other photographers out there. Just a thought. It's also perfectly fine the way it is.
Good point Nate, but I don't think you want to switch those two around because of the photograph colors. The outside two are black and whites, so the color needs to be in the middle. I *might* make the fonts over the pictures smaller, but I'm not sure what that would look like without playing with it myself. (Ha. I totally wanted to be a graphic designer for a while.) It is lovely though. :)
Oh good point with the black and white thing. Perhaps the wedding and adventure could be flip-flopped though. Again, it wouldn't really matter in the end I don't think, but it's my 2 cents.
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Since you asked for Critiques, I'm gonna try to offer some. I think it looks great, but maybe Adventure shouldn't be the first of the three things listed. People usually look for a photographer for Senior Pictures or Weddings before adventures, unless that's what you were going for in showing someone initially that you are different from the other photographers out there. Just a thought. It's also perfectly fine the way it is.
ReplyDeleteGood point Nate, but I don't think you want to switch those two around because of the photograph colors. The outside two are black and whites, so the color needs to be in the middle. I *might* make the fonts over the pictures smaller, but I'm not sure what that would look like without playing with it myself.
ReplyDelete(Ha. I totally wanted to be a graphic designer for a while.)
It is lovely though. :)
Oh good point with the black and white thing. Perhaps the wedding and adventure could be flip-flopped though. Again, it wouldn't really matter in the end I don't think, but it's my 2 cents.
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